Sasoriko Astkuo

;+;Personal Data

Username; { aj---styles }
Character Name; { Sasorkio Astkuo }
Age; { 15 }
Birthday; { Not required. Your Character's Birthday }
Height; { 180cms }
Weight; { 66kgs }
Notable Features; { red tattoo on chest of a scorpion, Multicoloured earing, }
Notable Quotes; { CMON. }
Genso Jutsu; { Water. }
Current Rank; { Academy Student. }

;+;Physical Appearance; { one red eye, one blue eye, black hair with purple streaks, blue jacket, black pants, black belt with blue gems, red scorpion tattoo, very muscly }
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;+;Village Information

Hometown; { Village in the mist }
Current Residence; { village in the mist }
Clan / Organisation / Family; { none . }

;+;Psychological Attributes; { strong but silent when around people. }

;+;Inventory; { kunai, demon wind shuriken and senborn }

;+;Jutsu List { Kirigakure no Jutsu-Village hidden in the mist technique, Waterchain, Mist clone. }

;+;History { Grew up alone doesnt make friends easily. He has never been a shinobi before he had to get a job at the age of 8 and to get enough money to enroll in ninja school so he could make new friends and learn the ways of the ninja. His parents were murded in a attempt kidnap of Sasoriko because he has a power that nobody else posses. He is also the only one in his village who can use the move water chain. }

sorry about the photo no,colour had to put it on a site couldn't get it from my folder. its a mix of gaara and sasori

Hmm Theres just a little you need to fix
Since your AS then the jutsus are fine
and try to go more deep into ur characters Past

After that if i was mod Then it would be

ACCEPTED

ight thankss

Sand is one of your specialistic abilities when you're in Kirigakure? Please for the love of god use some common sense, and how the hell can you have Water Needles in your inventory?

orite then ill change it no need to be so rude.

jessayee wrote:

orite then ill change it no need to be so rude.

No Need To Be Rude?
You'll learn, the only way to get people to actually accept your opinion on the internet is to be rude, simply because everyone thinks their better and will take advantage unless you dont give them the chance to ^^.

Hence being rude on the internet allways works.

no being rude fool >;0 and being rude never always works, sometimes a "please" may work >.> so why don't you use common sense